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The Secret Garden

A man once held a love so strong for me, so strong he made me a secret place.
A garden hidden just for me, filled with beauty and grace.

We spent hours in the garden together hand in hand while we walked around.
The birds sung and the fountain trickled, but his 'I love you' was my favourite sound.

I used to sit upon a swing he once made for me, he'd push me so softly in the summer's breeze.
The garden was a secret, set appart by a wall of stone, a wooden door and some trees.

We made love in the garden we conceived our baby.
Our perfect dream land would always last... Maybe?

One day our baby was born and our life was finally complete.
One day in the garden I wanted to swing, I came to my garden and sat upon its seat.

No one could have known the seat was rotten to it's core.
My body fell to its death, I was found upon the floor.

My love he blamed himself and filled him self with hate.
He banished away our garden, blocking off its gate.

He forbid any one from entering, leaving our place in the past.
Our baby girl, she got so big she really grew up so fast.

One day she took it upon herself to wander round the mansion's ground.
She saw a gate and broke in, can you imagen what she found?

A brambled over garden with a fountain running dry.
Her mothers garden hiden, she didnt understand why.

She ran to her father his face filled with upset.
After all these years the garden gave him pain and filled him with regret.

The father lashed out and told her not to enter ever again.
The daughter didn't understand why the garden brought him pain.

But you see he was angry at himself for me having to depart.
The daughter wanted that garden with all her little heart.

I wish with all I am and everything I'll be that he can forgive and learn to move on.
Deep in my heart I know that he did nothing wrong.

So I wished to myself that he would learn to let it all go.
I wished he'd put my garden back on for show.

I sent my thoughts to him one night while he dreamed away.
He woke up with an urge to open up the garden today.

Now my love pushes another on my swing and in her dress I watch her twirl.
I am finally happy because now that gardens filled with love with my husband and our girl.

iPuss

@iPuss

A kitten that writes? ... Yeaaaah ... Like that would ever happen!

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You have a way of reading my mind. I love you, the conversation I just had with my mum was about just this. I can't give all my love away or there will be none left for the ones who need it the most. This is wonderful and I thank you from my soul.πŸ˜˜πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—

@Stablish -Just smiles- πŸ’›

What a beautiful story. One of my favourite books is The Secret Garden, and although this is different, it has the same lost and found feel to it. πŸ˜„

@iPuss that is quite fabulous. Take a bow, girl. Well done 😊

One of my fav childhood books, you version is brilliant 😺

@jojo72 @leelee101 @sjw Thanks so much for your comments I really appreciate them. Lee thank you for the repost really kind. I loved the story as a child and wanted to ad a bit of my spark to it. I tend to only write about things that truly buzz in my head and today this is what my heart felt was good.

Aww great stuff babe 😘

@aleishagayle20 ^. ^ Thanks beautiful 😘

@iPuss anytime babey 😘

@iPuss wow this is amazing with nice twists and imagery. 🍦🍦🍦🍦🍦

Very good πŸ‘

Beautifully profound....bloody brilliant ....loving this poem:):):)

@misslittleDHP Im pleased you liked it so much. That really makes me feel good.

This is amazing! The story makes sense now!

Brilliant!

Effortlessly beautiful and sad. Love the hope at the end

@kilico1 @Nom @wolfie Thanks guys, appreciate the love, im needing it right now xx

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@iPuss As I was reading it I thought I had heard of the secret Garden ?? But after reading everybody else comments I see it's not the same ( not I would have known ) bloody good effort young lady 🌹🌹🌹have some of these for your Secret Garden πŸ‘

Beautiful 😒

@merlin1038 Thank you sweetheart xx 😘

Reminded me of the book thief too, you're so imaginative. :)

@EeemsD Thanks babe πŸ’›

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