Not home 'til late at night
You had earned the overtime
And your schedule getting tight
But there's a subtle truth
In what you did the hours for
And I could smell the cheap cologne
When you came in thru the door
To confront was not my style
I would never say a thing
Should have realised sooner
You'd removed your wedding ring
I gave you every chance
To go and prove me wrong
My tears are like rainwater
It's been raining all day long
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Morning :). I like that you have a wide range in your writing. I never know what emotions are going to be stirred 😊
@jojo72 haha! Neither do I! Most of the time a single line will just arrive and I will form the rest around it if I think it's strong enough. But you're right I never really know what's coming next hunny 👍❤😘
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