I'm grasping for air but there is none.
Once again
This fucking emptiness has won.
The battle of worthlessness.
Simple.
I'm nothing, I confess.
Shadows I embrace.
It's still clear.
I can still see that haunting face.
The face of no one.
From my own face
I cannot run.
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@niixxz well we are all here on Opuss or you can talk to me on kik if you ever want to chat. Just...keep on going. Don't give up. I've been depressed in the past - I won't say I know what you're going through because no one ever does but I know how it feels to be alone and sad and not know what to do. So yeah...just know people care k? 💜
Wow, this is very powerful. Amazing writing, but it does seem very troubled 🙍 I agree with @Irrational_Kimmi, we're all here for you if you ever need it 💙
@Blueblotts Haha thanks a lot for considering my writing as kick-ass. Means a lot to me! Nah not at all. I'm like a super stalker
@Irrational_Kimmi I can't even begin to tell you how nice it is to hear that ❤ I won't give up. Promise. But as you probably know it doesn't help the feeling of slowly dying on the inside
@niixxz I know, and someone saying they care doesn't make all the pain go away, but I do care, even if we don't know each other very well. ❤❤❤
@Irrational_Kimmi I've always thought that it means more when strangers care because they have less reasons for it. So thanks a million ❤
@niixxz my pleasure. And I mean it, feel free to message me on kik (same username) if you ever need to just talk. I don't do judging people, I've done enough stupid/bad things to ever judge. So yeah hugs ❤
@Blueblotts Thanks. *Suspiciously backing off and inspecting the surprise hug but then giving in and accepting the hug open heartedly*
@niixxz aww I'm glad I could make you feel a tiny bit happier. Don't lose faith, there are good people out there!😘❤
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