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I Feel Like...

...Smashing my head on the wall.

Ok, getting real fucking tiered of people not listening to the words that I speak.
Looking at me with a quirked brow you seem to think i'm the freak.

I'm getting waaay beyond agitated with being treated like a bit of crap.
My limit is getting close, temperatures boiling and i'm getting ready to snap.

When I start to tell you something thats getting to heavy to take.
When i've broken down to my knees and i'm telling you I don't wanna wake.

DON'T fill my ears with jelly boned noncence and chirpy advice.
STOP trying to convince me that its all good and everything is nice.

I'm not some stupid bitch out for a crocodile tear.
I've gone through stuff most of my life now is that clear?!?

When I come to you for help somthing is seriously wrong.
It's means i've been bottling everything all up for far to long.

I'm not looking for the worthless advice that's not gonna help me out.
But you'll say fucking shit like 'it will be ok...' like i'm 5 No doubt.

Since when did saying those sugary lies ever help somone in need.
I don't need the fucking niceties you are trying to feed.

I've been through enough of life to become street wise.
So please will you fuck off with those tiny white lies.

So next time somone comes to you when there looking for a genuine hand.
Don't say nice shit and burry your head in the sand.

Do the right thing and say the truth, even if it's 'i'm sorry I don't know how to help put it to an end.'
Just have an open ear stay quiet and be the loyal friend.

Don't turn away when things get all weird and hairy.
Stay by their side even if they act all fucked up and scary.

Because if you're just another moron to turn your back and false a lie.
You'll only fustrate them more, make them angry and cry.

When somone needs your help, just listen to what they have to say and never offer advice unless its asked for.
I can't count how many times i've been angry and just needed a verbal release. Nothing more. Some seem to think just because they have had a hard time too. They have all the answers. Sometimes you just wont understand what it is to be that person so dont try to patch it up with common sence advice.
It often leaves the person wanting to smash their own head on a wall.

iPuss

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A kitten that writes? ... Yeaaaah ... Like that would ever happen!

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Comments & Feedback (25)

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@TheViolator Such a gentleman. 😘😘😘

I know exactly what you mean babe I know the feeling I feel the same 😔

The most liberating feeling is friend who'll listen and not judge - I just mean to comfort when I say hope whatever it is works out soon 🌹

@redfae I 1000000% agree.

Sometimes "it will be ok" is all you can say, and sometimes the person who sad it truly believes it. Sometimes it's used to convince themselves. I understand, though. hugs

I wish I could just take a topic and create a poem like this. Wow, really expressive 👍

@Earthbound No. Sometimes the best thing to say is nothing.

@Earthbound Take this for example.

@Earthbound My friend has aids and hes gonna die. (Metaphorical) How does saying. It'll be ok help lmao?

@AlexMurray Thank you. I'm really sure you can. Why dont you try?

@iPuss That's not what I meant. I meant that when someone says to you "it'll be ok", sometimes they are trying to convince themselves, not you, I'd you get what I mean.

@Earthbound Aaaahhhh I see !

@iPuss hmm... I'll give it a shot I guess :)

@AlexMurray Message me when done! x

@DamianBlack. Babe. Where are you today! You are missed!! 💋

@iPuss message you? I'll comment k x

@iPuss Wow😳

@DuRoLuRo what 😔

@iPuss I was just shocked. Didn't quite expect that😄

I think when people say things like that they are just trying to make you feel better and be nice to you. It's kind of a way to let you know that they are there for support if you need them. They know they mightn't be able to help but they are there for you to listen and give hugs, No matter whats wrong. ☺

I have 2👂and do no How to use them, Hugs nice writing Btw

Should be ears

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