Overdue, a chat with you; my behaviour you defile
Make me pay in every way for our antics through the night
Poured like rain straight down the drain; health, money getting tight
Let me be an older me, I won't let you take me young
Even though I know you know our song is not yet sung
Take me high, then low, my sweetest foe, taste your defeat
End demons dance until by chance, I'm whole again, complete
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@leelee101 just a little thing...and I may be wrong, but I would put "an older me" instead of "a older me" I think it reads better....if you don't agree then just ignore my stupidity and I shall delete this comment π
@patdolan83 that's a good spot Pat, well done, I shall take remedial action. πππ thanks for reposting my good man ππββ
@sarahgamal aw thanks Sarah that's appreciated hun. ππ Big π smacker for the RP too πβ€π
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