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Household Challenge Results

My goodness me not even the help of Martini has made this decision easy...at all

There has been so many fabulous posts and it's been such a difficult decision to choose just three of you, so because I'm a cheeky girlie I haven't.......

In 3rd place we have the wonderful
@naaviie with 'Whittled'
@leelee101 with 'Attraction'
@iPuss with 'Knife Called Love'

In 2nd place we have the fabulous
@VikingHorn with 'Knife'
@ckahn with 'Maria Full of Grace'
@MrAlex with 'Knife Dance'

And in 1st place.....................

@Nom with the truly magnificent 'Ivory Keys'....
This poem really touched me...beautiful and tragic

HUGE CONGRATS TO ALL THE ABOVE

THANKYOU all for taking part, it's been an honour to read such fab posts....you truly are all amazing and now I'm off for a long lie down as all this judging has taken it out of me and the Martini has gone to my head!!!

misslittleDHP

@misslittleDHP

Writing has been my friend since a teenager...I laugh, cry, think, pretend, smile as I do it. I feel that I communicate better through my writing as in person I can appear a tad scatty.

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๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘ good luck Nom ๐Ÿ‘

Congratulations everyone ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘well done @Nom ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜

Oh well

Right I'm sick of this bloody household challenge. I put my all into evry piece I'm never chosen its normally all the 'in' Opussians like naaive misslittleDHP HeatherAnne leelee101 i think they are all a group with a smug plan

Woooo well done everyone!! ๐ŸŽ‰๐ŸŽˆ๐ŸŽ‰๐ŸŽˆ๐ŸŽ‰ have fun @Nom ๐Ÿ˜œ๐Ÿ˜œ

@mpallister24 - you have got it all wrong, and unfortunately that attitude won't get you anywhere.

@naaviie I don't think it is wrong- oh no ๐Ÿ˜

Congrats everyone that took part in the contest and special congrats to @Nom

Well done @Nom ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

@mpallister24 - I won't have a childish arguement with you, it is a shame that you don't enjoy just writing for yourself and I feel sorry for you

Congrats to @leelee101 @iPuss @ckahn @VikingHorn @MrAlex ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘

@mpallister24 I can assure you I NEVER choose on a whim...I choose from my own heart and soul what I liked and by writes that touched me in some way...I'm sure some people do it for a bit of fun...others like yourself put your heart and soul into it....and I'm sorry my lovely that you feel that way and frankly I'm a tad offended that you think I only chose those that are in a so called 'Opuss clan'...I repeat I only choose the ones that touched me in some way...I personally think that you are ALL winners for participating....it is supposed to be enjoyable and I'm a little concerned that you are taking it so very seriously...of course for you if you truly do feel this way then maybe the household challenge is not for you...but then again if you don't take part you will be missing out on the taking part!๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜

@naaviie I love writing and I'm not arguing I was stating fact

@naaviie ๐Ÿ˜œ I'm the man for a childish argument.. @mpallister24 you are coming on well, but you have to seriously compare and contrast your work with the top.. Keep improving and working at it, but don't spit the dummy ๐Ÿ˜ฒ

@misslittleDHP I dont take it seriously but I just think there is some kind of Opuss crew

@Burrfoot so you're gonna criticise me because my writing is not good? Well that's just great and the amount of shit that ends up on Opuss like written by a rank one-er is like oh it's not about the rank but of course they care about their stupid rank

@mpallister24 - please re-read Kim's comment!!!! And @Burrfoot is right, I think, it takes practice and hard work to improve. I hope you continue to write for the personal enjoyment.

@mpallister24 it is great you have drive and ambition, keep going with it but remain gracious. I've read some of your pieces and I can see your talented, keep going and don't let this get you down๐Ÿ’œ๐Ÿ’œ

@mpallister24 I didn't say your writing isn't good, I said you were improving. Do you think it's as good as the top? I am proud of a couple of mine out of a couple hundred!! The rest are just throw away bits of nonsense. I have pressed like on a few of yours and I only do that for posts I genuinely like. Be careful how you judge yourself and be truthful to yourself otherwise you won't have the drive to keep improving ๐Ÿ‘

@naaviie oh whatever I've read it's obvious it's fake

@mpallister24 of course your upset. If you think you've tried your very best and u always think I've tried my very best but sometimes there are just pieces of work that ate better. Also what touches you may not touch another. I'm very competitive and I can imagine you are too so it's understandable that you may feel upset if you don't win. You also have to remember its very difficult being the one who has to judge with so much talent in here including yourself. So just keep trying but don't accuse people of something that there not. โ˜บ๐Ÿ’š๐Ÿ‘

Aaaagghh there's loads of typos in my post. Too long to redo.

@mpallister24 - you can be as bitter as you like, it is only yourself you are hurting. If you choose not to listen to the advise of @Burrfoot @Faith @misslittleDHP and I, who are just trying to help then you only have yourself to blame. It is a shame to see this side of you, I was enjoying your work.

Thank you@eddie12309 you're the only one you has explained that to me in a kind non argumentative wayโ˜บ๐Ÿ˜˜

@mpallister24 my first comment gave you praise..

@naaviie how many times I have read their comments

@mpallister24 my first comment gave you praise, my last will give you constructive criticism.. Your knife entry.. Would a man that has killed his family call himself a 'pest' you have to let the story lead the rhyme not the other way round ๐Ÿ‘ I will say no more as I've reached a bit of a breaking point with petulance ๐Ÿ€

I'm really glad that @eddie12309 has said that to you @mpallister24 . She is right, we are all competitive and ambitious, and there is nothing wrong with that. But you can't win everything, so you must learn to be gracious in times of defeat and learn the hard fact of life that there will always be someone better than you. I apologise if I was argumentative, I was just offended by your continued comments like these.

@mpallister24 you have passion and I admire that my sweet I really do...there were many many entries and I can honestly say I found it truly difficult to choose, hence why I had 3 in each ....however being passionate is one thing but you cannot take rejection personally...many many great writers get rejected, as does anyone in many other areas such as actors and singers etc...it's how you deal with it that shows your strength of character....I've like quite a few of your posts and I look forward to reading more...but please don't get upset by not being chosen...it really is meant to be enjoyable๐Ÿ˜˜

@naaviie thanks! Congrats to you too๐Ÿ˜˜ big congrats to everyone and especially @Nom๐ŸŒŸ

@misslittleDHP Thank you very much! And congratulations to @nom and everybody else.

Ok I'm just going to step in here and suggest everyone just draws a line under this discussion before it goes too far! Lets focus back on how many amazing entries there were and that a very deserving piece won. Congrats to all involved and now lets see what inspiration the next word can bring @Nom โค

@naaviie @Burrfoot @misslittleDHP I'm apologising to you all for I may have perhaps offended you. I really didn't mean to- I get angry easily and am VERY competitive. Let's shake on it and rebuild our Opuss community, eh? ๐Ÿ‘‹๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ‘โค

Congratulations to everyone who took part. No 'opuss clan' I just think there are a lot of regular poets and I think it's amazing to watch each one as they grow and experiment with their poetry. โคโค

@mpallister24 how old are you? Because your response to this 'loss' makes you seem about ten years old. Seriously, if you react like that when things go wrong for you in real life you won't get very far before someone smacks you down. Judging poetry is a subjective thing - I would have chosen differently but @misslittleDHP chose the poems that touched her and that was her right. Your attitude will actually stop people from reading and giving you constructive criticism and thus it will stop you growing. I think you need to step back and look at your own big-headed and superior attitude before you come in throwing accusations and mean-spirited comments around.

@brownowl2012 @mpallister24 - deal - end of! ๐Ÿ’š

@Irrational_Kimmi I am ten and if you had read the comments you will have noticed that I apologised to anyone I may have offended๐Ÿ‘

@mpallister24 if you get that angry that easy maybe you shouldn't say anything

@mpallister24 excuse me, but I don't think there's any need to shove me into the mix... All anyone on here can do is try their best. And actually, I, personally, don't think rank is everything. Yes it's an achievement. But it's not why I write. Sorry. I just don't understand the anger. ๐Ÿ˜ฅ๐Ÿ˜ฅ

@naaviie ๐Ÿ˜˜โค๐Ÿ˜˜โค๐Ÿ˜˜โค

@mpallister24 I can do better than that Hun ...I will give you a huggie๐Ÿ’ช๐Ÿ’ช๐Ÿ’ช๐Ÿ’ช...

@mpallister24 then you shouldn't even be here you need to be 13. And to simply act like a brat and upset people and then issue a throw away apology is not acceptable behaviour. I shall be reporting you I'm sorry but opuss is no place for ten year olds to throw their toys out of the pram

@HeatherAnne if you had read the comments I have apologised to anyone I may have offended๐Ÿ‘

@seamonster what are the rules on age?

@Irrational_Kimmi I should just end commenting on Opusses? End of argument๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ‘โค

@mpallister24 I have read them. I just thought I'd add my input considering I was mention, thanks very much.

@HeatherAnne ok๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ‘โค๐Ÿ‘โค๐Ÿ˜˜

@mpallister24 well you shouldn't even be here if you are ten but I think people would have looked past that if you hadn't gone around upsetting everyone

@Irrational_Kimmi there is an age limit for Opuss!

@mpallister24 The people who win are amazing, you gotta remember that. This isn't the way you should go about it, just keep trying and that effort will pay of.

Yeah it's in the terms when you sign up, if you read them. I'm pretty sure you have to be 13 @mpallister24 but I'll check with @seamonster. And this is the reason; to stop immature kids ruining everyone's experience. I don't usually get angry but this is happening too often these days, makes me want to go elsewhere.

@Irrational_Kimmi capital S on @Seamonster isn't it?

@Irrational_Kimmi oh great. Thanks a lot. First you have a go at me and now try to kick me off Opuss. I'm gifted and talented for writing and Opuss has become a part of my daily life. So, @Irrational_Kimmi thanks a bunch.

@mpallister24 don't blame me, you did this with your immature behaviour. Like I said before, people would have ignored the age issue if you hadn't acted like a spoiled brat.

@overskill I don't think it matters but ok @Seamonster for good measure ๐Ÿ˜‰

@mpallister24 and I didn't have a go at you, I told you off for your frankly ridiculous behaviour. Difference. YOU started this.

@Irrational_Kimmi do you mean you would of ignored the age issue? And I'm not immature. In fact I am very mature and like I said I am just competitive

@Irrational_Kimmi but did you even have to get involved? ๐Ÿ˜

@mpallister24 @Irrational_Kimmi Seriously guys STOP please! This is not keeping with the spirit of Opuss at all

@brownowl2012 ๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜I know!๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜@Irrational_Kimmi just had to get involved!

@Irrational_Kimmi and I don't appreciate being called a spoilt beat.

@mpallister24 oh you are so immature. Yes. I love Opuss and I'm sick of kids ruining it with stupid behaviour. And when you go around accusing respected and liked writers sure, I think that gives me the right to get involved.

@Irrational_Kimmi and I don't appreciate being called a spoilt brat.

@mpallister24 and your responses are so childish. At least attempt a coherent response if you are going to attempt to argue with me

@Irrational_Kimmi I aren't accusing anyone, it's just my opinion

I know

Very well done @Nom ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ˜Š

@Irrational_Kimmi I don't want to argue with you so just please, stop it! ๐Ÿ†—โ”

I hate to be immature here but this is so funny. I am not trying to stir anything but everyone needs to grow up a bit.

@mpallister24 You know, I have gotten to judge a couple of these, and first of all, it's hard! I took the judging very seriously and spent a lot of time on it. Secondly, I went out of my way to try to get fresh blood involved, but you know what I found? When I was honest with myself, I had to admit that the top ranked writers are highly ranked for a reason. Nobody puts out a gem every post (certainly I don't), but most of the pieces I truly thought were best written were familiar names. Of course, it would be better if a contest like this could be judged blind, without knowing who wrote what, but I don't think there is any way to do that, but I wouldn't be surprised if instead of broadening the pool of winners, that narrowed it instead. But this really is primarily a place for practice and feedback, and rankings and competition are often more distraction than they're worth.

@mpallister24 you clearly accused @misslittleDHP of picking people who are in her clique, which is a testament to you being a hot-headed bad loser.

ps... well done to all who entered this round.

@naaviie @misslittleDHP @Irrational_Kimmi I see I have joined a smug group of writers! ๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚โค

@VikingHorn ๐Ÿ†—

@mpallister24 and I beg to differ. You are clearly immature. This is over, I have made my point.

@Irrational_Kimmi @mpallister24 this is 2nd night in a row a kid has acted like a child. My daughter is ten, but would not act like this. However I don't see the point in keeping it goin, let the gaffers sort it ๐Ÿ‘ I tried not to comment further, but can't say nowt ๐Ÿ˜ฒ

@Irrational_Kimmi I don't have to have you repeat that I'm immature, I think I get the picture. Just please, make peace! โœŒโœŒโœŒ๐Ÿ†—โ”, I think I

@leelee101 apparently so ๐Ÿ˜œ๐Ÿ˜˜

@leelee101 oh dear lord ๐Ÿ˜–๐Ÿ˜“๐Ÿ˜ฑ

@Burrfoot I have tried to stop it but @Irrational_Kimmi keeps picking out arguments! And to be honest you don't need to judge me, you don't know me at all!

@mpallister24 I'm not picking an argument, I'm merely replying to your responses. Like I said about 5 posts ago, it's over. I've had my say.

@Irrational_Kimmi @naaviie haha! I've read it all, I'm not getting involved. Just laughed when I read about the 'smug group with a plan'. ??? Probably is best to leave it now tho, it's bed time for some, you know? ๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚โค

@blindsilence you are probably being more mature than anyone else

@leelee101 damn straight king Lee ๐Ÿ˜˜

@mpallister24 @Irrational_Kimmi There is a very simple and mature way to end this... just both agree to disagree and then just walk away and forget about it. Will you try that? Please?!

@leelee101 - ah yes the call of the night beckons... Aaarrrroooooooo ๐ŸŒ™๐Ÿบ

@leelee101 hahahaha ๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚ everyone should calm doen! Yes, @mpallister24 has clearly been a bit immature, but she has apologised for it! Discussion over! Heads up, we are Opussians! Ps: please no one fight with me! I come in peace โœŒ๐Ÿ‘โค

@naaviie aaaaarrrooooo indeed! ๐ŸŒ™ โค๐Ÿ˜‚

I've said several times I'm done. But just to clarify I have re-read the Opuss terms and you do have to be 13 to join. Please read this Agreement carefully before accessing or using the Service. By accessing or using any part of the Service, you agree to become bound by the terms and conditions of this agreement. If you do not agree to all the terms and conditions of this agreement, then you may not access or use any part of the Service. If these terms and conditions are considered an offer by Seamonster, acceptance is expressly limited to these terms. The Service is available only to individuals who are at least 13 years old.

@mpallister24 http://www.opuss.com/terms/

@leelee101 ๐Ÿ˜‚ now I feel excluded ๐Ÿ˜ข

@Burrfoot you're okay mate, you're over 13... ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚

@leelee101 haha maybe in body but not sure about @Burrfoot mental age ๐Ÿ˜œ j/k

Sorry @brownowl2012 and sorry Kim, I shouldn't have said anything! ๐Ÿ˜ฅ all done now!

@leelee101 are you sure @Burrfoot is over 13?! ๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚

@Irrational_Kimmi thanks for kicking me off Opuss

@mpallister24 not my rules kid

@Irrational_Kimmi yeh well you didn't have to mention it and I don't even know how to delete my accoint

@mpallister24 no, I didn't. And if you had not started this whole thing then I never would have known, would I?

@Irrational_Kimmi but you didn't HAVE TO GET INVOLVED!!!

@leelee101 @Irrational_Kimmi @naaviie unfortunately both in age and weight ๐Ÿ˜ฅ

@Burrfoot ๐Ÿ˜‰

@mpallister24 this is going in circles, I've already justified this issue. I'm out of here.

@Irrational_Kimmi @naaviie @Burrfoot ๐Ÿ˜‚ late night loons, gotta love 'em ๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ‘โค

@Irrational_Kimmi I agree and I said lets make peace ages ago! So let's just make peace! โœŒโœŒโœŒโœŒโœŒ๐Ÿ˜˜

@mpallister24 โœŒ

@Irrational_Kimmi ๐Ÿ˜˜โœŒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜˜โœŒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

@Burrfoot Awe! ๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ’š and @leelee101 no other way to be!!! ๐Ÿ’š๐Ÿ’š๐ŸŒ™๐Ÿบ๐ŸŒ™๐Ÿบ

@mpallister24 just...stay off my Opusses unless you have something constructive to say. K? Because I don't like arguing with anyone. I got enough issues IRL! ๐Ÿ˜œ

Well done everyone!m

I think this might be a bad time, but thank you for picking mine, I am honestly overwhelmed! I need to think of a word now...

@Nom Lol we are ready whenever you are! Congrats on making first place!

@Nom it's def the right time my sweet...your write really was stunning...I'm looking forward to your word for the next household challenge....๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜˜

@misslittleDHP my word is up. Had a last minute change!

Wow what just happened?

109 comments seriously

@Nom congrats and have fun judging lol! @mpallister24 I'm sorry you feel there is a clique at the top ranks hun but you have to remember we wasn't always at or near the top and we all form friendships through the comments and challenges ect. I have seen lots of members rise through the ranks and some a just naturally gifted and can produce vast amounts of quality material (this could be due to age, having experienced many things ect ect) when I joined I wasn't automatically near the top, I had to post and comment and groups do form, I think it's a shame new members and those lower down do not comment and get involved more, everybody is here to write, read, learn and grow. I'm glad you voiced your opinion (maybe not in the best way I'm sure you will now agree), I'm also proud of you for apologising. Being competitive is great as it can improve our writing and make us more determined but don't let it rule you. Enjoy writing and write for all the good reasons and forget ranks, it really do not mean anything!! Some of the most remarkable pieces I have read come from those lower down but they do not comment or are as addicted to opuss as others. Get involved and comment more and keep writing hun!! Btw I judged one of these and believe me it's a nightmare trying to keep up with all the posts, it's a fun challenge ment to inspire people and give them something to write about if they are bored are stuck for inspiration!! X

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Congratulations, everyone!! ๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ˜ƒ

@nom Well done ๐Ÿ˜ฝ Maybe i'll win next time...

Well done @Nom! Great choice @misslittleDHP, just sad I didn't win!!!!

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