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redfae
redfae โ€ข 857 followers

You clamped my heart with shackles
You shot the metal through
My heart is raw, ripped open
As the shackles drag on the floor

You don't know that you hold the chain
Or the key to set me free
So painfully I wait for you
To come and set me free

Now that you have captured me
I'll be chained to you eternally
So if I am not what you want
Turn the key and free me from this lock

As I wait, you pull and tug
Oblivious to your hold
Secretly I hope you find the links
And connect your heart to mine

#emotional-poetry #general #psychological-metaphor #unrequited-love
redfae

@redfae

A redhead writer trying to get my novel published. I enjoy writing YA Paranormal Romances and so far had a short story and article published. I maintain my blog and website at www.alisonaldridge.co.nr

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Comments & Feedback (16)

RichWithey
RichWithey
May 22, 2012 at 8:43 AM
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TheViolator
TheViolator
May 22, 2012 at 8:50 AM

Nice one ๐Ÿ‘

leelee101
leelee101
May 22, 2012 at 9:18 AM

Great stuff ally ๐Ÿ˜Š

redfae
redfae
May 22, 2012 at 12:40 PM

@RichWithey @TheViolator @leelee101 Thanks :D

smellyfingers
smellyfingers
May 22, 2012 at 5:24 PM

Very good ally ๐Ÿฆ๐Ÿฆ๐Ÿฆ๐Ÿฆ๐Ÿฆ

glen
glen
May 22, 2012 at 5:31 PM

I like ๐Ÿ˜œ๐Ÿ‘€

redfae
redfae
May 22, 2012 at 5:44 PM

@smellyfingers @glensaggs Thanks :) I need to learn how to do these pics people post :)

smellyfingers
smellyfingers
May 22, 2012 at 7:07 PM

@redfae in app store find the free "emoji" app with 4 stars lol ๐Ÿ‘

ZuperZed
ZuperZed
May 22, 2012 at 8:27 PM

Very good! ;)

redfae
redfae
May 22, 2012 at 9:23 PM

@smellyfingers @ZuperZed ๐Ÿ˜„โ˜€๐ŸŽˆ๐Ÿ’—๐Ÿ‘

smellyfingers
smellyfingers
May 22, 2012 at 10:15 PM

@redfae yay ๐Ÿ‘ lol ๐Ÿ˜‰

taylergoatier
taylergoatier
May 22, 2012 at 11:39 PM

Beautifully written ๐Ÿ’˜

dinoetry
dinoetry
May 23, 2012 at 10:00 PM

Ahh I can relate to this well!

redfae
redfae
May 23, 2012 at 10:18 PM

@taylergoatier thank you :)

redfae
redfae
May 23, 2012 at 10:19 PM

@dinoetry Hope you get your crush ๐Ÿ˜‰

dinoetry
dinoetry
May 23, 2012 at 10:22 PM

@redfae thanks!

simplystylish
simplystylish
May 23, 2012 at 10:57 PM

Wow !

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