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I Once Held Your Heart

To have you in my hand
Then watch as you slip
Mournful awful sounds
As you lose your grip

I cannot tell you it's ok
It's not my place to say
Trying to help you out
Just fills you up with doubt

Watching someone I care for
Fall hard and cry on the floor
Breaks my heart even more
It's for the best, I know, I'm sure

Knowing someone is in pain
Knowing I'm the one at blame
Is something very sad too see
I wouldn't wish it on my worst enemy

Time will heal her heart
Ready for a fresh start
A new path now awaits
With friends who'll open the gate

Rise up and walk on through
It's what you have to now do
I'll watch you smiling from afar
Remembering I once held your heart

smellyfingers

@smellyfingers

Asking lots of questions and thinking through the ones that are unanswered!! Kik: smellyfingers soundcloud: www.soundcloud.com/smellyfingers

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Comments & Feedback (35)

Powerful stuff mate really good πŸŽπŸŽπŸŽπŸŽπŸŽπŸ’¨πŸ™†

Well done sir. No other words needed other then well done

Excellent πŸ‘

@glen thank you mate πŸ‘ lol new rating system? πŸ˜‚

@puffy1980 appreciate it mate πŸ‘ thank you for reposting 🍻

@smellyfingers I'm experimenting with new ones lol got bored of the monkeys ha they were a bit inappropriate on serious posts ha πŸ’πŸ’¨πŸ’©

@mort glad you liked it mate and appreciate the repost 🍻

That

Beautiful and touching @smellyfingers πŸ’“

@Liza thank you hun 😘 and for reposting πŸ’

I like it. Reminds me of parenthood, actually.

@smellyfingers on fire today sir. Another beautiful piece really well written πŸ‘πŸ˜₯😊🍺

Wow, very hard to break a heart. πŸ’šπŸ’”πŸ’š

Beautiful write oozing with emotion...hugs I'm guessing you may need one 😚😚

@LivingDeadGirl thanks for repost

@VikingHorn cool I'm glad you like it and can relate to it in that way 😘

@leelee101 thank you kindly sir and for the repost 🍻

@gazplend thanks for repost mate 🍻

@naaviie thank you Nic! I guess but not if 1 heart won't or can't let go of another's heart πŸ˜’β€πŸ’™β€ appreciate the repost hun 😘

@sjw thank you honey and what a lovely hug you give 😍 appreciate the repost ❀😘

@Dimi thank you for reposting 😘

@smellyfingers 😽

Very hard, been there before

Very hard, broke my heart to break theirs. Really feel for you, have some hugs and β˜•πŸ’šπŸ’šπŸ’š

@naaviie exactly babe! Thank you muchly for your lovely warm hug πŸ’πŸ˜˜

Touching and honest. πŸ˜“

Anytime πŸ’š

@lonelynutmeg98 thank up for repost hun 😘

@eddie12309 thank you, yes it's very sad but true unfortunately 😏

Wow...

@melody glad you like it mate πŸ‘

A captivating & heart rending piece...truly beautiful 😌😘

Awww this is heartbreaking stuff...it's not easy to hurt those you care about but if it's not right it's not right....it takes a strong person to go for all the right reasons, rather than stay for the wrong....hugs my lovelyπŸ’”πŸ’”πŸ’šπŸ’š

@Fly10 thank you Leigh Mwah x

@misslittleDHP thank you Kim really appreciate it and for the warm hug xx

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