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A Monster and His Boy

This tale to you, I now impart,
A story sad right from the start;
There may be morals,
Maybe none...
But time my woeful tale begun.

Once upon a time before,
In darkest, dankest days of yore,
There was a boy of deep lament,
Who truly knew what sadness meant.

He lived alone, all but his uncle,
An ugly man with gross carbuncle;
But looks do not belie the man...
Though some act as ugly as they can.

Alas he treated our poor boy,
Most cruelly, with a twisted joy;
He made him cook and clean and wipe,
And fed him nought but gruel and tripe.

All day the boy would fetch and clean,
All for an uncle, cruel and mean,
From dreary morn, to lifeless night,
He'd live a life of endless plight.

But there was another that I miss,
Who's lot was worse than even this,
For locked away deep in the roof,
His uncle hid a wicked truth...

A travelling carnival had once arrived,
And curiosities they contrived;
Attractions strange and rare delights,
To tempt his uncle with their sights.

In an empty corner of that fair,
A forgotten tent he did find there;
Within he saw a thing so strange,
He stole it and hid it in his grange.

Imprisoned in a dusty loft,
No chairs to sit or bedding soft,
He locked away his stolen prize:
A gruesome monster with yellow eyes!

Each night his uncle would torment,
The poor creature from the circus tent,
Laughing cruelly at the wretch,
Deciding what price that it might fetch.

The boy took pity on the beast,
And dearly wished it were released,
But feared his uncle would enrage,
And replace it with him within the cage.

But every day at half past two,
The twisted man would leave him to
His weary chores, as he himself,
Went into town to spend his wealth.

And when he left, the boy would climb,
Up to the attic old with grime,
To sit nearby the beast in chain,
And talk to ease the monster's pain.

At first the monster would not speak,
But sat in silence, still and meek,
But as the days of visits passed,
He began to talk to him at last.

Stories of his wondrous home,
Where others like him live and roam,
A hidden city, within a wood,
Where monster live as monsters should.

Each day they talked and shared their tales,
Both a prisoner of different jails;
Until one day their story changed:
The uncle retuning, un-arranged!

The attic door was thrown aside,
The boy in terror tried to hide,
As his uncle screamed at him with rage,
Why he'd trespassed in the cage.

The boy begged and pleaded to no avail,
The uncle grabbed his nephew frail,
And shook him hard until he choked,
As the boy just sobbed, his small cheeks soaked.

The uncle, tired of the boy's sad cries,
Decided to end the treacherous lies,
And raising a fist to smash and flay...
His arm was stopped, an inch away!

He turned to look.
His eyes now wide:
Upon his arm, a hand untied;
And following its hairy length,
He met a gaze of monster strength.

The monster, fearing for his friend,
Had found resolve to shackles bend;
And working free, his hands unbound;
They had at last his captor found...

Police arrived the following day,
To take the uncle's corpse away.
They questioned the monster,
They questioned the boy;
But truthful answers could not employ.

They left them both within their home,
With proviso that they did not roam;
No charges pressed, for it transpired,
By police the uncle was not admired.

And so both of them at last were free,
And lived in peace, most happily;
And night and day they would aspire,
To sit and tell tales by the fire.

But things are never quite that plain,
And soon fate turned for them again;
For word began to spread nearby,
That there a killer monster did lie.

At first it was but nervous glances,
From passing folk who feared their chances;
But things for them grew grim once more,
When the letters came in through the door.

Scrawled in angry, hated script,
Upon a paper crudely ripped,
Were words to make the young boy cry:

YOU HAVE A MONSTER.
IT MUST DIE.

The letters came but few a first,
But soon the boy did fear the worst;
Each day upon the mat would lie:
YOU HAVE A MONSTER.
IT MUST DIE.

The monster saw the boy's distress,
And to the problem he did address;
So they packed a bag and left their home,
And out into the world they roam.

They walked together many days,
Taking lost and unseen ways,
Until before at last they stood,
The hidden city in a wood.

The monster was welcomed home with joy,
And to his kin he showed the boy;
And though they found him strange to see,
They welcomed him, reluctantly.

The monster showed the boy his home,
The house he had once called his own;
And so their residence they did employ,
To live as monster and his boy.

And now it seems our tale is done,
Far happier than when we first begun;
The monster and his boy at last,
Could let the world drift peacefully past.

Except of course, as we have seen,
Things never seem to stay serene;
And sure enough a morning came,
To change their poor fate once again.

The other monsters had begun to stare,
At a boy they could not bear;
At last they came to realise,
He looked ugly to their yellow eyes.

And so one day, the monster saw,
A letter left just by the door;
He opened it...
And there did lie:

YOU HAVE A MONSTER.
IT MUST DIE.

waynedoz

@waynedoz

Six foot three bespectacled ginger-bearded designer and illustrator. I also poetify with rhymification. www.waynedorrington.co.uk

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I kneel in the presence of a master!!!!!!! :)

Poetry genius at bestπŸ‘ this is a marvelous piece beyond words!

Absolutely genius!

Oh I loved it thank you.

Flippin awesome !

Love it :D

I could say the same to you mate @Weirdwolf :)

Wow thanks @milkeyedmender - glad you like it :)

Thanks @hilster :)

Thank you @majifresh :)

Thanks @justice_dk :)

Thanks very much @redfae :)

@waynedoz in awe. Absolutely marvellous sir 😊

Mate this is unique! Read it at five in the morn and really enjoyed that!

Brilliant!!

Compelling stuff. Very entertaining and well composed. If only my so petty rhymes, could echo yours and truly shine. Very well done mate.

Masterfully done! This poem could be used as the basis for an entire literature/social course. So much to read and discuss. Am quite blown away. :)

I could never rhyme that much... Brill :D

Amazing!

Excellent. Read it to my kids they loved it πŸ‘

@waynedoz πŸ‘an awesome poem πŸ‘

Hey thanks @leelee101 - glad you like it :)

Thanks @osheraskin - thats apt as it was written mostly in the small hours!

Thanks @osheraskin :)

Thanks @yowwa - its not easy! Takes me ages to find the right combination of words! :)

Wow thanks @jojo72 ! Just think, thousands of school kids could resent being forced to read it.. I like that!

Thanks @Mizzywoo - just takes time to find the right words. It never comes out right first time - takes lots of tinkering :)

Thanks @crowncottage :)

Thanks @hairy :) glad your kids liked it - surprising as its kind of a sad story

Hey thanks @TheViolator !

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Thanks @ell :) I can't remember how this one started - I just wrote a note of doing a poem about a monster and a boy. It wasn't until I started writing the notes for the story that all the ideas got fleshed out. I think I'm a bit weird to be honest

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@ell :(

@ell sorry that should have been :)

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It is defo worth putting in a book Wayne :D

Will think about it @justice_dk :)

Love it!!! Made my brother read it

πŸ‘clapclapclapclapclapπŸ‘ brilliant?

Oops stupid tiny keyboard. Didn't mean to put a question mark there!

@waynedoz you should get this published! Or is it already?

Thanks to you and apologies to your brother @BlueRebel :)

Thanks @bop365 - no not published anywhere but here :)

Wow. You really are amazing at poetry!, I love this!. :D

Thanks very much @RedWednesday :)

Absolutely brilliant... your rhymification and story telling skills will never fail to amaze me.

Thanks @Noonington - very kind of you :)

Fckn brilliant!!

Thanks @d89raj :)

Brilliant poem - really enjoyed reading it :D

Thanks very much @deviltortoise :)

I must remember to read this to my dad tomorrow. It's as good tonight as it was last night and it will still be the best poem today tomorrow and I F'in Loved It!!!!

You're too kind @Weirdwolf - I'm just glad a few people out there seem to like it - gives me motivation to keep writing :)

@waynedoz You better!!! :)

@waynedoz I totally love this, it's amazing! I may have to read this to my class at school, they would love it!

Wow that's really kind of you @Irrational_Kimmi -if you do, hope they like it. If you do, ask them what they think the title refers to, then ask them again afterwards. It could refer to 3 different relationships. :)

Just love it! You should make it in to a little children's book, for slightly older kids ;)

I'd love to one day for some of my poems and illustrate them also. Hopefully one day I'll do it :)

This is perfect.

Thanks @awesomeannie :)

Loved it, very easy to read and understand, I also think children would enjoy this.

Thanks very much @shazydee :)

An enchantingly clever modern day fairy tale. Some of the verses are beautifully constructed with sumptuous language and perfect rhythm and rhyme. Nice work!

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Thanks @Antony ! Nice of you to feed back :)

Thanks @awesomeannie :)

I love this, I wanna publish a book, any tips??

@PolkadotLove thanks :) I'm trying that too. I guess I'd suggest writing a book that if you heard about it, you'd want to read. Write for a readership of one - yourself. Everything else is just icing on the cake :)

Thank you! I'll bear that in mind!!

A beautifully written piece that kept me hooked until the end. Superb twist ending, cleverly woven together. I loved it! Any hints for a struggling writer/poet?!

Thanks @drinky97 - lovely feedback. I guess whatever you right, try a tiny bit of planning first. Just a couple of lines getting the story / message of what you're trying to say. I think a poem should always have some kind of point or message. If its a story poem, think of it like a book - maybe an intriguing opening, then introduce the characters, then the story and maybe an interesting ending. Above all, no matter what you write, write the poem / story that you would want to read if you heard about it. Don't try and write what you think people might like. God I waffle on.

@waynedoz thanks so much that's great advice! You dont waffle so don't worry!

@waynedoz I just reread this and have to tell you that I think it's excellent!! Well done 😻

Thanks @crowncottage - I think this poem is one of the ones I'm happiest with :)

@waynedoz you should be proud of it! 😊

Awesome :)

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