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Smelly Feet

My first poem written at school- many,many years ago and read fast to the tune of "baggy trousers" by Madness lol

People walking down the street,
dirty socks and smelly feet,
old tramp shuffling feet on the ground ,
making such a disgusting sound.

Go to a disco, dance all night,
shoes are really getting tight,
shoes are crunching all my toes,
I have to go and pick my nose.

Somebody makes a crude remark,
Ugh, she's done a stinky fart,
no ,it isn't it's her feet,
gosh,cor blimey , how they reek!

You see my feet, they smelled so bad,
I had a problem, it's so sad,
odour eaters, they smell so nice,
I listened to, everyone's advice!

Tiia

@Tiia

Hi fellow Opussians ! I am a published poet having been writing since I was 16. Having had poetry published in poetry anthologies. My life has been too busy to say the least over the last 6 years and so my son Daniel Hing a Ling has persuaded me to put pen to paper and start writing again and join in on the Opussian way of life!

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Brilliant! πŸ˜‚πŸ‘

πŸ˜‚ brilliant! Guess what I'll be humming all day...πŸ‘πŸ‘

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