I've never written you down
I carry you in my head
For you were never born
A part of me now dead
What hurt the most
Was that you were no 4
People would ask me
What did you do that for?
How very dare they
Think that to me you were less
A life inside of me
Is a gift that I am blessed
It's so very amazing
No matter how many times
Yes I was stunned
When I saw those two blue lines
We thought we were done
No more kids for us
Then you happened
It caused a bit of fuss
If I'm honest I did wonder
Whether I could cope?
Would I consider no you?
That is a definite..nope
Deep within me though
I sensed something not right
The feeling never left me
I hoped and prayed it might
At seven weeks pregnant
At work I began to bleed
They wanted to send me home
This advice I did heed
I went to my friends
Who cared for me there
As long as I wasn't alone
I really didn't care
Then again more hurt
For people were so blasé
To them you were nothing
A life with no say
That is what still hurts
That you were brushed aside
But you were a life
That I carried inside
You were a seven week life
So people didn't care
So about you and me
I didn't speak or share
I shed tears for you
Remember you so dear
Boy or girl, I do not know
You were loved, that is clear
So here is my poem
A necessary write
That you're never forgotten
My precious little life
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Writing has been my friend since a teenager...I laugh, cry, think, pretend, smile as I do it. I feel that I communicate better through my writing as in person I can appear a tad scatty.
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Comments & Feedback (32)
@Fly10 this was a toughie, cried as I wrote this but it needed to be written by way of remembering...thanks for the support my sweet...means a lot 🌹🌹💔❤💔
Wow, this must have been hard to write! So glad you did though, it is so heartfelt and honest, such a good way to remember. 💚💚💚
@naaviie thankyou so so much my lovely...very tearful but felt good to get it down...that's been pent up for years...grateful for the kind words my sweet❤💚❤
I'm glad writing helps, and I'm sure this poem will help others to relate and understand more what this is like. 💚💚 ebook worthy for sure.
This bought tears to my eyes I know how it feels, your very brave putting it into words a beautiful tribute and thank you for sharing it with us ❤❤❤
Amazingly open babe, well done. Thank you for giving us an insight into your world. I feel honoured.x
@misslittleDHP An awesome powerful sad beautiful tribute 👍🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹 my reading glasses have misted over 😜😜
Wow so powerful! Felt your emotional journey throughout. I'm hoping writing began a healing somewhat! Brought me out in goosebumps! My heart goes out to all those who suffered loss in this way. Life's always so precoous'🌺
@Burrfoot @nikujagagirl @sjw @MrsS @Thebeautifulundead @Stablish @ashhkat @eddie12309 @ckahn a@leelee101 @qualified2dream ...my gorgeous Opussian friends sorry for the mass message but I'm out all day and night so not much time...mwah mwah for all your kind words and warmth of friendship...that is why I chose to write this and share it with you all as I knew it would be held in precious hands...cannot THANKYOU all enough for always being there for me...this was a bit of therapy for me it really was...💋💋💋💗💜💗💜💗
@crowncottage @TheCodsPollocks @Fly10 @naaviie the above that I've written goes without saying this is meant for all you lovely peeps xxxxx💜💚💜💚
@minxyMolly I'm good thanks my sweet...it was a while ago...but yesterday for some reason I thought I'd never really talked about the loss as people were very much not interested as it would have been my 4th...I felt I just had to write it down...felt good to do so...mwah for asking tho sweetie💋💋💚❤💚❤
@misslittleDHP very beautiful yet sad and emotional write hun! I'm glad writing this helps you in some way. Big love and hugs 🍸🍸❤💙❤💋
@TheViolator awwww bless you my lovely...you must think me terribly rude you were def meant to have been there but sometimes my taps aren't hard enough...of course it indeed applies to you my sweet...your comments and thoughts I hold dear...for an accidental miss of you ...you have your very own huggie💪💪and a mwah💋and a 🌷🌹🌷🌹...and a big THANKYOU xxxx
@smellyfingers @MrAlex THANKYOU my lovelies for your sweet comments...def felt better getting that write out...mwah mwah💋💋
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