Don't stop to compare,
A hare, with a square,
You won't get very far,
In a cream-filled car,
Like a tortoise on speed,
That dragon's drinking mead,
When clouds fall from the skies,
And people stop their lies,
Chairs on the ceiling,
The old men are pleading,
Stop this nightmare,
For that square is a hare.
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23, Vegetarian, (insanely busy) Vet student pondering about love, life and dragons.
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I agree! Another brilliant write, made me laugh...tortoise on speed hahaha! Good flow and rhyme too :)
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