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NightCreeps

As I lay here quietly breathing,
The quiet night outside perceiving,
My eyes upon the ceiling wide in fear;
The house below is still,
With no sound to break the chill,
Save the blood within my heart and in my ears.

In this dark and inky night,
There is no comfort, no respite,
As I lay with sheets drawn tight, just barely breathing;
Not a whisper can I hear,
With no movement far or near,
Just an empty blackness painted on that ceiling.

My breathing stops in fright,
As a sound dissects the night,
Almost silent is its flight, yet still is there;
First a scratch,
and then a scuttle,
As if far away and subtle,
But to me it cuts the heart of my despair.

It creeps stronger now and quicker,
As my pulse grows fast and thicker,
As I listen for a flicker of that sound;
And then a cold and creeping feeling,
As it crawls close to the ceiling,
Yet no nearer to revealing where it's found.

And now the scuttle turns to clicking,
As if jagged legs are pricking,
Many limbs that are now flicking closer still;
Yet my wide eyes are still seeking,
But no voice from me is speaking,
As the clattering comes creeping with a chill.

And now at last revealing,
I see them moving on the ceiling,
As my fractured mind is reeling from the sight;
A writhing, mass of things,
Black and twitching,
sharpened stings,
Across the ceiling it all clings -
a creeping blight.

Flicking, spidery creatures,
A thousand pointed ghastly features,
Poisoned pincers snap and chatter as they near;
A spindly mass of spines,
Through the darkness red eyes shine,
A sea of blackened blood that pricks with fear.

Across the ceiling they all crawl,
Bleeding closer down the wall,
Their pincers clacking as they sprawl towards my bed;
Up the bedposts they ascend,
Their spidery paths they all do wend,
Closer, closer to the end, my chest, my head...

I can feel their black legs pricking,
As up my chest I sense their clicking,
Fangs and pincers with their sickening biting chatter;
Up my arms and to my shoulders,
Their writhing weight bear down like boulders,
As the fear inside me smoulders as they scatter.

On my neck, I feel their bite,
Sharp and spindly crawl the blight,
Legs and pincers writhe and fight to reach my jaw;
Up my cheek,
my nose,
my lips,
I feel a hundred spindly tips,
As they force their way inside my stricken maw.

I try to call out, try to shout,
But the spiders writhe about,
Fill my mouth both in and out and stop my calls;
Then at last they reach my eyes,
Wide and glassy with surprise,
Feel their legs begin to prise and sting eyeballs...

Their is light.
I am screaming.
The room is empty.
I am dreaming.
I feel a warm and caring feeling hold me tight;
It is my father and my mother,
They say there's nothing there to smother,
I am having just another nightmare in the night.

They have soothed me, I am calmed,
There are no spiders that have harmed,
I lie down, far less alarmed, no creeping clicks;
Now gently they withdraw,
To leave me in the dark once more,
Just a frightened tired and weary boy of six.

waynedoz

@waynedoz

Six foot three bespectacled ginger-bearded designer and illustrator. I also poetify with rhymification. www.waynedorrington.co.uk

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I dont like spiders, and now i Will not sleep at all!!! Nice writing !

Brilliant Wayne absolutely great write. I used to have the spider dream and you've written it! Brrrr... 😊

This is brilliant! I hate all creepy crawlies, luckily my cats are on creepy crawly patrol most of the time πŸ˜„ you're in Spain? I am so jealous!

Brilliantly written as always - great stuff 😊

Good grief! This is superb my man. Well done.

@PoppyA thanks :) cats are good at things like that (when they feel like it.) yes in spain for hols. Last day today :(

Thanks @bryanrobertheap :)

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Thanks very much @yowwa :)

@waynedoz ; lucky lucky! β˜€ hope you've had a good tune

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Excellent! I love it ☺

Awesomeness!!!!! :D

Thanks @Jatt :)

Thanks @Weirdwolf :)

@waynedoz I know how that feels πŸ‘πŸ‘

Wow...gripping...spine tingling write...but I still like spiders!

Scared to sleep tonight πŸ™brilliant!

@TheViolator yep - we've all had some kind of dream like that at some point :)

@misslittleDHP thanks :). - I don't mind spiders. They're just not allowed in my house. They've got the garden to play in but they can't come in.

@sjw thank you (and sorry)

awesome! it reads a lot like the raven by poe, which is awesome (:

@burningpaperplanes thanks - I'm a big fan of Poe :)

Love it wayne, you captured the style-if that is the right word?- of a child. Thanks enjoyed lots🍺

Wow. Loved it, not exactly your usual style, but amazing all the same!

Thanks @merlin1038 :)

Thanks @bop365 :)

@waynedoz lovely poem :) although I like spiders and creepy crawlies of all kind ;)

Your in Spain on hols and your still writing for us, what a hero. I like spiders as well, i used to get rid of them for my sister

Thanks @powpunch - I'm not a fan of spiders, but we have an understanding.

Thanks @shazydee :) and good work on the spider removal services

@waynedoz You ok hun. Youve not been too active. Hope all is ok? Love iPuss xx

@iPuss thanks for thinking of me. I'm good - I'll keep posting here and there, but I may step down a little. I'll lose out on rankings, but that was never important to me :)

@waynedoz Why step down. Your poems are good.

@iPuss ah they just take up a lot of my time. I'm ending up staying awake until the small hours writing them and I think I just want to cut that down a little.

@waynedoz Yeah I dont sleep till 3 am any more...

@iPuss yeah. I think that writing should be fun, not a chore so to stop it getting like that im just slowing down. But not stopping :)

@waynedoz its deffinatly a chore atm

@iPuss well, like I say - do it for fun, not because you feel you have to, that's my view

@waynedoz speaking of fun check out my poem limp sock xx haha x

@iPuss will do now :)

Ah - could have been my younger son when he was 6 - or 16!! Haha! He is a strapping tall rugby player but still likes his mum to catch the spiders and put them out!

@missdainty - it takes a real man to be courageous enough to get someone else to do that. That's what I keep telling myself anyway.

I'm sure you're right!

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