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Behind Closed Doors

A true story...

"Best you don't tell anyone, it'll be a secret-mine & yours. Besides, I'm sure it happens,
behind other peoples doors.."

So when 5yrs old she picked me up
from school
Swollen lip, eye black and blue
And my best friend stared and asked me,
I replied
'Soon your mum will look like that too'

Of course, my best friend had her secrets
Jehovah parents fuelled her fear
But to show her loyalty to me
She broke the mould that year

I remember the forbidden Xmas card, she pushed secretly into my hand
And I cried as I knew the lengths
to which she'd schemed and planned
with discarded tinsel, glitter, card and
borrowed glue..
As if to say
" It's ok-we're just the same, me and you."

And the years passed, but no let up
His drinking and temper only got worse
At 9yrs old, thoughts of
'Could it be my fault?
Was my birth some kind of curse?'

And the guilt from not protecting her
was hard to overcome
Until the night, he pushed too far and
dug out his old shotgun

Loaded it in front, of his three children
Terrified
Beat her round the head, oblivious to pleas and cries..

Hiding my brother and sister
I made the jump from window to the street below
Promising them this time I'd get help-
A neighbour or policeman who could overthrow...

I ran frightened down back roads and alleys
To where I thought he wouldn't find me
A remote phone box-made the 999 call, thinking finally
Now we'll be free

But no such thing as child protection then,
Just a slap on the wrist and a warning
One week later, copper returns the shotgun,with a smile and a bright
'Good Morning'.....

Eventually she left him
But by then the damage was done
A violent legacy imprinted in the mind
Of two daughters and his only son

Grown up with kids of my own now
And the knowledge strikes me even more so
That every child growing up
Just needs their dad to be
their hero

When you're programmed to love someone you hate
The line is such a fine divide
A lost childhood and trust that is broken
Just fucks you up inside.

All rights reserved
Fly10 Leigh 2012

Fly10

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Just here to test the experience..

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Comments & Feedback (50)

Whoa, horrifying really...

Brilliantly written, terrible journey, totally understood

Horror, Well written

@naaviie I edited it a fair bit as well! What doesn't kill you makes you stronger & all that jazz...Thanks for liking(if you know what I mean)😌

@simplystylish Thanks for commenting 😌

@Weirdwolf Enough said😔 Thanks for repost😚

Bless you

Heartbreaking! :( Very well written!

Heart wrenching and eye opening. Well done.

@wolfie 😌

@ZuperZed Thank you..one of the more difficult ones to write😓 I've signed up to No Sorrow day tomorrow tho, so thought best get it finished & out there in good time😊

@RDE Thanks for your comments...really appreciated 😌

@ZuperZed 😘for repost

@RDE @wolfie Big thank you for repost-much appreciated 😊

@Fly10 Yeah, I've done a few tough ones myself... :/ It helps tho, therapy in a way. Take care! ;)

@ZuperZed I've read yours & know it takes a little piece of you to write it sometimes..but yes, it definitely lays a few ghosts to rest. So we'll both just keep at it! Catch you later 😉

@Fly10 heartbreaking, well done for posting this must've been hard but beautifully written zxz

@Fly10 that must have tough putting down. Very well written. X

@Fly10 - defo one of the sayings I live by. Gotta 'like' good writing, even when it scares me! (perhaps especially so) 💚

@leelee101 Yeah that one's been hanging round for a while now. Kept adding/deleting parts whenever I was in the right frame of mind...Glad it's done😌 Big😚for repost x

@Fly10 tough writing girl well done👍 it's not easy to share your pain in an open way👍 I too had a brutal childhood

@Cinders Can't say I particularly enjoyed writing it, but now it's done it's a relief😌 Big thanks for repost😚

Bugger fat thumb syndrome lol

@naaviie I agree completely 😌

@MrAlex Thank you for repost 😚😌

@Fly10 No problem this piece deserves it, well done 😊

@TheViolator Thank you & appreciate your comments😚 I've dealt with it now, but occasionally a thought or memory will blindside me & knock the wind from my sails...you just learn to get back up again😌 Hope life treating you well now too💜😌

@TheViolator Oh, & the thumb thing? I do it ALL the time😖😄

@Fly10 when my father died I buried the pain and bad memories with him. But if I'm watching a film and a father does/says something nice to/for the son I still cry, cos I know that I missed out when I was a child. I never had kids of my own as I was scared to pass on the brutality to my kids

@Fly10 I evan had the snip as soon as I could

@Fly10 very deep,almost in tears reading this,big respect

@TheViolator My dad still very much alive & although I see

@TheViolator I'm so sorry to hear it affected you so badly-but I completely understand. I think sometimes it affects boys differently to girls, as I know my brother was terrified he had inherited that part of our dad. Unlike you, my dad is still very much alive. I see him a handful of times a year, even though we live in the same time. I decided I'd be the better person, so I make sure he has birthday/Xmas cards etc, because now, I just feel sorry for him & the poor excuse of a father that he is. My experiences have made me far more aware with my own children, as to the impact of our actions as parents. Two third things have come of my experience 1) I vowed never to be with a man who hurt me in ANY way 2) I like to thing I'm a better mum a a result of it all. I've no doubt some positives have perhaps come out of it for you too😌

@TheViolator Few odd mistakes in text above, so please excuse! Wish there was a was to correct without deleting & starting comment all over again!😖

@gazplend Thank you for your lovely comment...& for taking the time to read 😌😚

No problem,cant wait to read more but don't make me cry again :-)

@gazplend I'll try not to...for a couple of days at least 😊

I believe what life throws at us makes us who we are, and clearly your a talented writer :)

@sjw Thank you so much. Appreciated😌

Solo is really sweet

@solo Thank you😌

@Fly10 ok you can make me cry again,I don't mind :-)

@Fly10 sorry for late reply ?? Just not up to it at the time. Thankyou for your kind words 🌹Maybe it has affected me more than I know/let on, I have tried to close my mind to it, but sometimes a crack will appear, I have tried to be strong for so long. (can't think were I was going with that) My father used my young sister for sex !!! It's hard thinking about it all now 40 years have passed but it's still there in my head. Again Thankyou 🌹🌹

I had a similar childhood, and even now fourty something years later it still causes alot of pain! I wonder if we would be writers without all of the baggage we carry.?! My heart relates to yours!

@Lovinmalamutes Thank you. And I think you're right-our experience make us the people we are today & just gotta hope that we learn from them. It's not a door I open very often, as like you, it's a long time ago. When I do however, it's just like yesterday😔 I'm REALLY good at closing and locking that door again! A skill I've perfected over the years 😌

I know, how well I know!!! ❤❤

@Fly10 Blimey that was some write babe, sad and very emotional but very well written!! Can relate too 😘 I wrote one called "Daddies Departed" quite an old one in my list 😉

This s beautifully written sad but incredible I can totally relate I'm glad you informed of this post and I'm glad you've been able to move on from this. It's a disturbing issue but it's happening more and more :( great post none the less

Beautifully written, the truth

Adds more too the story, not something a child. Should have to deal with

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